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To improve the logic and flow of the essay, the writer should revise sentence 5 by replacing the word "money" with the word "dough. " deleting the sentence to clarify the overall argument. Inserting the phrase "are awesomely fast" after "tablets" to add personality. Adding the transition "however" at the beginning to connect the ideas better

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The writer should revise sentence 5 and add the phrase "however" at the beginning to better connect the ideas, as shown in the last answer option.

What are transition words?

  • They are words that connect the ideas of a text.
  • They are words that promote cohesion between the clauses of a sentence.
  • These are words that make writing and reading fluid.

The use of transitional words is essential for the good development of the text, as they promote fluidity, connection, and the text's efficiency in conveying a message.

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