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How should Kari revise her paragraph to make it more readable?

-eliminate the second sentence comparing Krasner to Kahlo
-reconsider whether she wants to refer to the cited sources
-evaluate the effectiveness of including two different quotes
-delete the definitions of the words attributes and reiterated

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azikennamdi

There are eight sentences in all. All of which seem connected except the second sentence which stands out because it mentions Kahlo, and nothing further is written of Kahlo.

  • Therefore, the second sentence stands as a distraction and should be removed by Kari.

  • This will make the entire excerpt more readable.

Other generic techniques for making sentences more readable are:

  • Avoiding run-on sentences: That is, two or more sentences that are separable, joined together without punctuations;

  • Avoiding the use of complicated words: The rule here is to use short words as often as is possible.

Learn more about making sentences easier to read  at the link below:

https://brainly.com/question/5537956

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